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怎样让自己的 文字变的简练

题主若是想写小说却嫌自己太啰嗦的话，不妨先通过有方向阅读来培养自己的文字提炼能力。网文阅读害死人！网文阅读害死人！网文阅读害死人！！！（重要的事必须咬牙切齿地说三遍），按字数给稿酬泯灭了无数网络写手的节操，任你什么『大神』都难免如此。阅读翻译文学也尽量谨慎，特别是近年来翻译的作品。意识流请避开；大部分前苏联文学及日本文学请避开；魔幻小说也要慎重——君不见《魔戒》、“冰火”系列一棵树描写两三行字的惨状……那么问题来了——（挖掘机你死开！）到底读什么最好呢？答案是：宋词！炼字嘛，还是咱们老祖宗最牛，苦吟一字捻断数茎须的事一点不夸张。古文中，经史子集文字晦涩，《诗经》《离骚》过于久远，散文略显华而不实，唐诗炼则炼矣，但严守格律这是要逼死现代人么？所以以词为最佳，简约而活泼，同时比诗更贴近白话文，兼具音律之美——因为本来就是歌词嘛，现今的例子可以参看方文山的作词，受宋词影响非常之大。（当然，唐诗里也是有异类的，白居易就是名副其实的白话小王子，通俗易懂大家都爱他！）哎呀写得手好酸……什么？你说你要写公文？公文不是以裹脚布为上品么哈哈哈哈哈哈（被拖走）
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逻辑通透，情感锋锐。
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Try to enhance your logic and critical thinking.-----------Here are some key elements that make up your lengthy work.(a) clichés or dead imagery(b) complicated verb phrases substituted for simple verbs(c) Pretentious words, foreign loan words, and jargon(d) Vague, ambiguous and meaningless words and phrases-----------I will explain each and give an example of the following.a)Often get used to avoid thinking clearly enough about the primary subject matter to invent a vivid and appropriate phrases and imagery.A cliché is a phrase that is overused, predictable, unoriginal, and which betrays a failure to think about the subject matter in a fresh and attentive way.E.g. as different as apples and orangesA metaphor is the transfer of vocabulary, associations, and commonplaces about one subject matter to emphasize, suppress, and reorganize another subject matter.E.g. swan songb)The complicated phrases make sentences unnecessarily wordy and euphemistic; they tend to soften our language and obscure what could be said in simple direct language.E.g. mistakes were madec)Are often used to make simple or biased sentences seem objective, scientific, or impartial. Euphemisms are ways of softening the language so as to talk about bad things as if they were good things or even as if they were neutral, thereby obscuring the values those things have.E.g. status quo and weltanschauungd)Words that sound fine or impressive but get used without any clear meaning or without sorting out which of various meanings is intended may be used to dishonestly mislead or obscure what is said.E.g. democracy-----------Orwell’s six rules to help avoid misleading language.I.\tNever use a metaphor, which you are used to seeing in print.II.\tNever use a long word where a short one will do.III.\tEliminate unnecessary words.IV.\tNever use the passive voice where you can use the active voice.V.\tNever use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.VI.\tBreak any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.-----------May be updated at anytime.Sincerely welcome to point out the mistakes, thanks.
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多看，多写，多删，嘿嘿
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再次复习一边文言文，尽量限制自己每句话的字数。但这得看情况暂时写这么多，明天继续，这个问题价值很高


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